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• The Introduction That Nobody Reads •
º Background Check º
Welcome, welcome, step right up, to the newest(ish) production from Game Freak Studios: A Pineapple Under the Sea! Time for a background check on this baby.
Bahah. So, as the title oh-so-subtly suggests, this story is about a pineapple under the sea. I'll give you one guess as to who's pineapple it is. If you get it wrong, I don't think you deserve to breathe.
Anyway, I started this story a few months ago, about halfway through the '07 school year. I finished it the middle-ish of May, and have been making minor corrections and revisions ever since. I've decided to open it to the public, to see what you guys think.
So read it, and tell me how much it stinks. D:
º The Lowdown º
Ok, so here's the lowdown. I have the entire story typed up already. It is safely tucked away amidst friends and family in my Microsoft Word documents. Because I like to torment my fans (Wait, scratch that. If I had fans, I would torment them. >.>
, though, I'm going to slowly feed it to you over a period of time. Specifically, I will be updating with one chapter every week. Don't worry, though. There are only 10 chapters. At the rate of a chapter a week, you'll have the entire story in a little less than a 2 and a half months. It's all good. Oh yeah, and if I get more readers I might decide to post the chapters a bit faster.
º Background Check º
Welcome, welcome, step right up, to the newest(ish) production from Game Freak Studios: A Pineapple Under the Sea! Time for a background check on this baby.
Bahah. So, as the title oh-so-subtly suggests, this story is about a pineapple under the sea. I'll give you one guess as to who's pineapple it is. If you get it wrong, I don't think you deserve to breathe.
Anyway, I started this story a few months ago, about halfway through the '07 school year. I finished it the middle-ish of May, and have been making minor corrections and revisions ever since. I've decided to open it to the public, to see what you guys think.
So read it, and tell me how much it stinks. D:
º The Lowdown º
Ok, so here's the lowdown. I have the entire story typed up already. It is safely tucked away amidst friends and family in my Microsoft Word documents. Because I like to torment my fans (Wait, scratch that. If I had fans, I would torment them. >.>
, though, I'm going to slowly feed it to you over a period of time. Specifically, I will be updating with one chapter every week. Don't worry, though. There are only 10 chapters. At the rate of a chapter a week, you'll have the entire story in a little less than a 2 and a half months. It's all good. Oh yeah, and if I get more readers I might decide to post the chapters a bit faster.
07-Jul-2007 23:09:58 - Last edited on 19-Oct-2007 01:39:05 by Narcisi
• Quotes From Cool People Praising the Awesomeness That Is My Story •
Patriot5 said:
"I've heard good things about this story and await the continuation!"
[First poster!]
Orb Master44 said:
"After reading your first page of reserves I'm afraid they're going to be funnier than the story XD!"
Wishfish41 said:
"That was odd, yet it made me laugh, lol. I liked it, good start!"
[Writers of Runescape founder! ;O]
Shadow128931 said:
"This is a very well written story! Good job! I can't wait to read the next chapters.
"
Zappo 6 said:
"Knaaaaaaaave
I like it.
"
[Wench! ;D]
Joppi J said:
"Bump for joo, Game, for you, truly, are the most 1337 of them all."
Cooljedidude said:
"Wha...? What happened to your story? This has really gone through a lot of editing I see!
Well, glad to see the adventure of Zach continue, in your crazy, insane world. You've really improved from the first Zach stories you wrote."
Dudelydude7 said:
"Oh my GAWD! This is the most beutifully done weird story I have seen in my whole LIFE! You mixed freakin' firearms with SPONGE BOB, and pulled it off!! How do you do that!??! I don't know how you did that but it scares me, it's so amazing! Have some chocolate while I dial 911!
*hands a large chunk of milk chocolate*"
Archerjohn5 said:
"You are an amazing writer. Next time may I suggest finding a more serious topic? Still....WOW!!!!!
"
Smurf Black said:
"Indeed; this story is magnificent."
Numbuh007 said:
"sup game! i just read everything from beginning to end and i like it! awesome story keep writing!"
Axle Leroy said:
"Bookmarked. Awesome story Game."
Lordofdraken said:
"The story was great though, I think I already told you that "elsewhere". Nicely done."
[Owner of The Amethyst Library!]
121snake121 said:
"Completely halarious, absolutely original. Brilliant."
[ Professional Reviewer!]
Scout574 said:
"I absolutely loved it so much I read the whole thing."
[Owner of the Writer's Temple!]
Patriot5 said:
"I've heard good things about this story and await the continuation!"
[First poster!]
Orb Master44 said:
"After reading your first page of reserves I'm afraid they're going to be funnier than the story XD!"
Wishfish41 said:
"That was odd, yet it made me laugh, lol. I liked it, good start!"
[Writers of Runescape founder! ;O]
Shadow128931 said:
"This is a very well written story! Good job! I can't wait to read the next chapters.
"
Zappo 6 said:
"Knaaaaaaaave
I like it.
"
[Wench! ;D]
Joppi J said:
"Bump for joo, Game, for you, truly, are the most 1337 of them all."
Cooljedidude said:
"Wha...? What happened to your story? This has really gone through a lot of editing I see!
Well, glad to see the adventure of Zach continue, in your crazy, insane world. You've really improved from the first Zach stories you wrote."
Dudelydude7 said:
"Oh my GAWD! This is the most beutifully done weird story I have seen in my whole LIFE! You mixed freakin' firearms with SPONGE BOB, and pulled it off!! How do you do that!??! I don't know how you did that but it scares me, it's so amazing! Have some chocolate while I dial 911!
*hands a large chunk of milk chocolate*"
Archerjohn5 said:
"You are an amazing writer. Next time may I suggest finding a more serious topic? Still....WOW!!!!!
"
Smurf Black said:
"Indeed; this story is magnificent."
Numbuh007 said:
"sup game! i just read everything from beginning to end and i like it! awesome story keep writing!"
Axle Leroy said:
"Bookmarked. Awesome story Game."
Lordofdraken said:
"The story was great though, I think I already told you that "elsewhere". Nicely done."
[Owner of The Amethyst Library!]
121snake121 said:
"Completely halarious, absolutely original. Brilliant."
[ Professional Reviewer!]
Scout574 said:
"I absolutely loved it so much I read the whole thing."
[Owner of the Writer's Temple!]
07-Jul-2007 23:11:07 - Last edited on 19-Feb-2008 22:55:22 by Narcisi
• Quotes From Cool People Praising the Awesomeness That Is My Story •
»» Continued
I Corryn I said:
"I enjoyed this story quite a bit Game. Its strong points were in its originality, characterization and grammar, as well as a great deal of good dialogue."
[ Professional Reviewer!]
Sigurdur130 said:
"I really like this story
Wish you'd write more
"
[Owner of the Academy of Literature!(last time I checked xD)]
DLe Uloser said:
"This story is awesome. Without Gamefreak *Grabs him by neck and rubs his head extra fast* I wouldn't be writing stories today. If anyone says this story is horrible; you will be seeing me in court tomorrow, or maybe next month. Soon anyway."
[Devoted Poster xD]
Cowloverwhee said:
"Very nice! Unthinkably creative."
[Owner of The Bovine Grading System.]
Auraofguthix said:
"Very funny story, Game; just read the whole thing."
[Master of EPIC.]
Onekingd0wn said:
"HILARIOUS!!!"
Blue Orb 7 said:
"Good story... Good story..."
»» Continued
I Corryn I said:
"I enjoyed this story quite a bit Game. Its strong points were in its originality, characterization and grammar, as well as a great deal of good dialogue."
[ Professional Reviewer!]
Sigurdur130 said:
"I really like this story
Wish you'd write more
"
[Owner of the Academy of Literature!(last time I checked xD)]
DLe Uloser said:
"This story is awesome. Without Gamefreak *Grabs him by neck and rubs his head extra fast* I wouldn't be writing stories today. If anyone says this story is horrible; you will be seeing me in court tomorrow, or maybe next month. Soon anyway."
[Devoted Poster xD]
Cowloverwhee said:
"Very nice! Unthinkably creative."
[Owner of The Bovine Grading System.]
Auraofguthix said:
"Very funny story, Game; just read the whole thing."
[Master of EPIC.]
Onekingd0wn said:
"HILARIOUS!!!"
Blue Orb 7 said:
"Good story... Good story..."
07-Jul-2007 23:11:40 - Last edited on 21-May-2008 20:09:37 by Narcisi
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