This is mostly for writing practice, so please be kind.
You will be reading a short introduction I wrote. My goal is to have it evolve into a Runescape story. I will try to post more daily. All feedback is greatly appreciated, whether it be negative or positive.
You will be reading a short introduction I wrote. My goal is to have it evolve into a Runescape story. I will try to post more daily. All feedback is greatly appreciated, whether it be negative or positive.
The Castles of the World
Introduction
Smoke and fire rose through the air, lighting the night sky in an ominous blaze of crimson red. The foul stench of sulfur hovered amongst the campsite, its smell, filled our hearts with both despair and malice. The ferocious display we gazed upon was the footprint of the Dark Order, a trail of ruin and death became the inheritance of our eyes. There was nothing left of the Dorrek encampment , it was completely desecrated. The sight of anguish enraged us so, but the call for aid had reached us too late. The malevolent intent by our clansmen had been returned with the sword of betrayal, not one of our kin had been spared, and we were left with the responsibility of laying them to an honorable rest.
I removed the steel plated gauntlet from my right hand, and clasped a pile of ash from amongst the destruction. Fresh blood still intermingled within, causing an inferno of emotion to swirl within my chest. The anger I felt inside my soul overwhelmed me, my heart beat as the sound of a war drum, and my frustration out powered even the blaze, which encompassed the forsaken camp. I ascended to my feet hastily, and with self-control, those around me would not have noticed my hidden sorrows. I gave the order to my men, bury the dead with haste, and make preparation. Tonight we would search until we found the remnants of the Dark Order, and when we found them we would offer the blades of justice.
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07-Mar-2015 00:54:53 - Last edited on 07-Mar-2015 01:21:06 by Venenatis
