Sorry about that old comment, great story, great story line. I can't critisize because i can't write more than three pages of A4 Kudos. 8/10 for the plot 10/10 for your imagination
22-Dec-2007 21:49:27
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Draviusi
I know, I don't expect pure positive, this currently is my worst story on the Forums.
A better read from me is Chronicles of the Knights, or H1 - The Trap.
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