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.. The only bad things was that....
1, the main characters died, which I would dislike in any book, why not just send them to the shadow realm, prison of Zaros?
2, I think you should have made the characters... more alive, it is a bit unnatural that Ryan, from being a simple farmer boy, suddenly becomes a great warrior, and finds out that he is the son of an god, and dont really seem to care much about it, I think it would have been better if he had problems accepting it, etc.
•·.·´¯`·.·•Anton, einherjar of Valhall•·.·´¯`·.·•

21-Sep-2007 17:00:11

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It was my first story. If you read We Ride To War I think the characters and such are MUCH better described.
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EDIT: Btw I think having Ryan die caused a great effect on the story.

21-Sep-2007 18:06:49 - Last edited on 21-Sep-2007 18:11:13 by [#E4B29LWTR]

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