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Morning. I wasn't really deleting fans lol but it gets very annoying when you finish a story and nobody bumps anymore.
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02-Sep-2007 17:10:21

Scarpa9

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bump

03-Sep-2007 03:14:16

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Night.
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03-Sep-2007 05:01:04

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good-morning

03-Sep-2007 14:31:37

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Morning.
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03-Sep-2007 16:35:24

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Nice, Auro, I read to the part with the mage. While it could use some more descriptivness, I mean, you describe scenery well, but maybe some good fight matierial. Make your characters do something cool, but not to extrvegant. Like when Ryan cuts of the ogre's ear, maybe if he jumped off the cage chains or something. It's a nice plot so far, and pretty good.

03-Sep-2007 19:38:49 - Last edited on 03-Sep-2007 23:45:17 by [#9Y7BNFZMH]