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The name Tigerstar just *reeks* menace and trickery.

I DON'T TRUST HER!@!

Good start, a little too fast-paced for my likes. If I would to make one suggestion it would be to slow it down a little bit. Other than that, it was great!

04-Sep-2010 18:31:37

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Gotcha. I'll try and slow it down a bit. I'm assuming whoever reads this will have read Noobdom, so I didn't bother introducing the characters again. Maybe that's why the chapter feels so fast-paced...

Lol. You don't like Tigerstar, huh? You are scarily perceptive...

04-Sep-2010 18:46:07 - Last edited on 04-Sep-2010 18:46:25 by Fireheart449

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Funny. I was just looking to see where this story was, and you bumped it. :P

Also, me and Flood were thinking. Why on Runescape does Freak have to flirt with EVERY GOD DAMN GIRL IN THE STORY?! Maybe the reason Dawn doesn't like him is because he forgets about her everytime somebody ELSE comes around. I mean seriously... it's humorous! I don't know if it's supposed to be that way, but it's really funny to see Freak gawk at a lady, then turn around to Dawn and go "Ger, I've been wooing you for so long, why don't you like me?"

Also, pineapples.

05-Sep-2010 01:46:56

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