Plot (very important): 15/15
Character development and description: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Descriptive words and actions: 10/5
Imaginitve: 20/20
Creative: 20/20
I enjoyed to read it: 20/20
TOTAL: 100/100
Comments: This was a very good story, I loved the descriptions and you should write more. Good job! Dimond writer!!
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05-Jun-2008 23:12:57
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