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Roald stood over him and cackled. “You are certainly brave, very brave. But stubborn. In denial even! Why cant you accept defeat?” Roald picked him up and shoved him towards the lava, Ransar slid off but grabbed the edge with his hand. “This is the end Ransar! LOD cannot be stopped! All this time you and your foolish friends have been in denial! Any last words, my adversary? My equal? My arch enemy?” Ransar, in great pain, mumbled. “No..but I do..have a last action.” Ransar brought out a small dagger, with the word Baccul inscribed on it. All of the letters except the B had at least one small spec of blue dust in them. In a quick slash Ransar chipped a bit of Roalds gem off – and the little bit fell straight into the groove of the B. The sword began to glow. “Sorry mate. But its game over for you.” Ransar threw the sword into the lava.
Suddenly, the entire tower groaned and the blue light at the top turned red. Roald froze and looked up. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- ARGH!” Roald suddenly was absorbed into the lava pit. Ransar had pushed him in and climbed back up. Darklago suddenly came up the stairs. “Ransar, there’s some gnome copters outside! COME ON!” Everyone got on to the single seat versions of the gnome copters, there luckily being enough for everyone. “HURRY IT UP PEOPLE, SHES GONNA BLOW!” The others quickly made it to safety. Ransar was still strapping himself in, when…
Shockwave. The tower exploded and a mushroom cloud appeared. The gnome copters that made it landed and the pilots looked back. Emmerai fell to her knees. “No** The tower’s remains came down like small meteors all over. Smoke drifted across the battlefield. Silence came across the crowd. They had won – but now they were in grief at their loss. Suddenly the remains of a gnome copter smashed into the ground, in the middle of the smoke. Emmerai looked at the floor and a tear rolled off her cheek. But then she heard a familiar coughing noise…
A shadow of a man slowly came out of the smoke. He was

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holding a dragon long sword and his smashed up rune full helmet. He threw the helmet to the ground and looked up. Ransar had made it. He held his dragon long in the air, and then drove it in to the ground. The crowd erupted and Emmerai ran up and hugged him. He whispered into her ear. “You did*’t REALLY think I was dead, did you?” She smiled. “Yaknow’ what?” He frowned. “What?”
“Shut the hell up and kiss me.”
And so the battle had ended. People had fallen In battle, R*R and LOD, but would not be forgotten. It had been a titanic war, one that had ravaged the land. And it made people think. Was war really worth it? Suddenly, a new world order came about. Peace was the new pound, and love the new penny. People realised that no-one ever won wars, they just lost. People began to see that through peace, an argument could be solved without unneeded bloodshed, that you did*’t need to kill to get what you want. The world was a better place. Why? Because the LOD was gone. Or so we think.
But something felt strange. Someone had been forgotten. That someone, was Commander Fayte Creed. The LOD Commander who went missing – who was never found. But that is because he was somewhere else. COMPLETELY somewhere else.
800 years later, North Varrock
Two soldiers were patrolling the modern borders of the Wilderness, holding back any monsters or beasts that dared come near them and their modern guns. The world had not kept its promise of peace completely – but still war was extremely rare and armies were only used for defence. Out of nowhere a small portal had appeared. And one of the soldiers held up his rifle, aiming at the portal. “W-who goes there!”
Within seconds both soldiers were dead. Commander Fayte Creed dropped his sword and picked up one of the guns. He had vengeance in his eyes.
The End…or is it?
TADAA!!!! END OF THE STORY! –Cries- But hey, a cliff-hanger for the sequel! Wooo!
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21-Nov-2008 14:12:01 - Last edited on 21-Aug-2009 12:08:02 by [#OJC2YQLJ6]

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I would just like to thank everyone who has supported, bumped and read the story. If it wasn’t for you I would have forgotten about this – I would not have bothered. But you guys have put the essence that the story needs into me. Despite all the long waiting times, we have finally got there. This thread is still open – I would appreciate it to be kept bumped for more people to re-read. Once I have completed the first few chapters for the next story, I will repost this one and put a readers list – everyone from this story who has read and posted on this thread. Then I will post the new one. Don’t worry, I will tell you what the new one is called when it is out.
In the meantime, Rate and please comment!

21-Nov-2008 14:12:11

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that was a great story! im not too crazy about the sequel with the guns but u know what ull make it go somewhere haha cant wait for the sequel let us all know.... FIRST RATE WOOT!



I give it: ***** (5 stars((out of 5)) )

21-Nov-2008 20:53:27

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Name: Arkkataka
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Age: 34
Height: 6'2
Strength: range
Weapon of choice: Darkbow with dragon arrows
Armor: Armadyls armor
Appearance: Dark hair, a dark brown goatee, very fast, extremely agile, lean muscle
Personality: He loves history and is highly educated in history of LOD and RCR, He prefers range over melee and mage, very cautious and efficient at what he does, extremely loyal, to the extent he would die for the cause he serves.
He can't be broken by any interagation, absolutly hates being beat in anything, his main drawback is he is not good at listening to anyone, even his superiors so if he makes a bad calculation its result can be devastating
He can sometimes seen cruel most often to the strong in order to strengthen them and is disliked by most people outside the Fremennik lands because of this, he idolizes Fayte Creed to a limited extent, he likes Fayte's military genius and military skills, but disliked his cruelty to the weak

History: He was at the top of his class when he was drafted in the military, using his combat knowledge of the early RCR, he rose through the ranks faster than anyone since Faytl Creed, at age 22 he was commander of the Fremnick forces, by the time he reached age 25 he commanded a force more diverse than anyone had ever known.
His military genius had helped the Fremennik win the most recent war and made them the lead fighting force, at age 26 he formed an elite group known as "Eagle eyes" that are efficient killers, but only used to assassinate people who are trying to cause another world war, it has been far more successful than any assassination group in history, and only top-of-their-class students are allowed to even attempt to join.
He is known to sometimes solves things the voilent but effective way, he has always made sure that anyone who serves him serves him out of respect rather than fear to strengthen his ability to lead. (to be continued)

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(continued)
At age 29 he made the greastest achievement in Runescape history, he recovered the GS, and gave it to his most loyal Elite soldier, Aerogolas. At age 31 he displayed his diplomatic skills when we formed an alliance between him and the dwarves of keldagrim, eventually merging them together.
During a "small" war between Fremnick and Varrock he found something amazing buried in Varrock Castle, an old manuscript, about LOD and RCR, containing information of the birth of LOD, what it stood for, how they became corrupt, and their ultimate defeat.
At age 34 Arkkataka was awarded the greatest honor in Fremnick history, the a blurite/gold/sil*thril badge reconizing him as the greatest Leader the fremnick have ever known, since then he has improved the military at an average pace...

23-Nov-2008 02:32:00 - Last edited on 23-Nov-2008 02:51:34 by Arkkataka

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