Lol. You have just come on my story to flame me.
If you read what Passion said on your thread you will see what I mean by bad format. SPelling wasnt my only complaint.
All I did was ask you not to advertise on my thread.
PS. FROD, I would genrally say you are getting ahead of yourself as my story is not as terrible as you say. It is better than a 4. Its not all about putting the time and place of something. Its about a good story, something with esscense to it and more than just fight scenes. My storyline has much more depth than yours does.
So dont come on my thread calling me a "noob" or whatever and saying you have read most of it when you obviously havent, and you try to give me lessons in my writing when I am probably better at it than you are. Im going for a career in writing, and I might not make it but f I do i'd like to see you keep this arguement then.
I rest my case.
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