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Rhaenyra

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Kippling4

09-Aug-2007 12:35:36
woa i cant believe you could spend your time writing a random storie about runescape why dont u just play it rather thn doin this
Rammal94

10-Aug-2007 09:48:14
Kippling4
09-Aug-2007 12:35:36
woa i cant believe you could spend your time writing a random storie about runescape why dont u just play it rather thn doin this
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woah, how about you get off the thread :l Its fun, thats why, and ggives me something to do when im bored.
And 87% of the time im on sumin to do with RS im playing the game acctually.


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Kind of funny how people want you to play the game instead of write a decent story. Actually, its not funny at all. To all who write these stories, "kudos" to you. You are doing something productive that will help you later in life, and you are getting kids who don't read a lot, to read. Well done and keep writing.
Rha*nyra T

17-Dec-2007 21:43:17

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Chapter 11: Counter Offensive
Commander Creed was standing upon the walls of Arougdene. It was with gritted teeth that he did so. In front of him, about 50 miles away, an army of 300,000 RCR rebels waited to advance. Death Fire stood next to him. He had been promoted to Field Captain after taking out a squad of soldiers that were marching by himself, despite his injuries. Tanis was also there. Tanis, take the North. Death Fire, take the South. I will wait at the port. Tanis face suddenly went pale and he looked at his Commander. Sir, may be a bit late for that. Everyone, get off the walls and get underground! 50 RCR magic carpet attackers (To save a lot of typing, they are now known as MCAs) swung down out of the sky and attacked the cities garrison. And now the RCR ground forces were in range.
8 People stood upon the ridge with their forces surrounding the city. Armenk, the legendary leader, was back from hiding. Ransar, Emmerai, Karenzi, Taran, Darklago, Kaitia and General Buroos Latyeka. The navy covered the enemy port and the air attacks were softening the enemy up. The catapults and gnome tortoises were ready. A long line of bowmen stood ready, with flames flickering from the end of the arrows. General Latyeka prepared to shout the signal, but Taran stopped him. There are civilians inside. We cannot burn it. The General nodded and the bowmen put their fires out. They raised their bows and opened fire.
Creed was not in the greatest of moods. Although, he never seemed to want to be in a good mood. But this was a Creed style bad mood like no other. He was rushing around, killing people who didnt obey immediately. He knew they couldnt hold the city and that was a fact. He picked up a magic ball of flame that had been burst from a mages staff, ignoring the searing pain, and threw it up. An MCA crumpled. Death Fire was bleeding and he sprinted to the gates. Then his mouth dropped in horror as he saw the gate fall inwards. The 8 people from the rid

19-Dec-2007 07:00:45

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ridge charged in all crossbows blazing with swords and magic staffs out. The ordinary troops followed them. Creed turned around to feel a bolt hit him in the arm. He decided he had enough and that he must admit defeat. He gave the order for all units to try and get to the dock and to save as many men as possible. It was the first time he had ever shown mercy.
Then he started to stumble out of the cities north gate, past the enemy forces and up north towards Hemmenster. Arougdene had been Ransar and Emmerais first battle. It was Creeds last.

19-Dec-2007 07:01:24

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i like it. maybe a liiitle more detal about them peoples lives. more perpective from the main characters, and maybe make them go REALLY deep and emotional. like a remake of bacculs death. kill kaitia off if you want to and make darkalgo go on a massive KILLING SPREE!!YEAH!ahem...
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19-Dec-2007 21:43:05

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