Arkkataka Posts: 4,327 Adamant Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Merry Christmas!! 13-Dec-2009 00:27:43 - Last edited on 21-Dec-2009 20:39:50 by Arkkataka
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Copied and pasted onto a word document. Edit your post. I'll think about your idea, maybe. Oh and bump. 13-Dec-2009 10:59:57
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump. 15-Dec-2009 22:05:25
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump. 18-Dec-2009 18:16:06
Archon Mach Posts: 1,348 Mithril Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Not bad...but it needs smoother transitions. Good use of [nostalgic] description! -Vand El 18-Dec-2009 19:17:36
Archon Mach Posts: 1,348 Mithril Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump. 20-Dec-2009 19:07:32
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Thanks. I think i agree with you about transitions. Often breaks between paragraphs defer from being structural to being used as a way of organising events, which isnt good writing and i need to improve on that. 21-Dec-2009 17:23:24
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump. 22-Dec-2009 12:22:56
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump, Merry CHristmas! 26-Dec-2009 19:40:34
[#OJC2YQLJ6] Posts: 10,624 Opal Posts by user Forum Profile RuneMetrics Profile Bump. 28-Dec-2009 15:47:39