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I really didn't think that the writing was horrible, in fact I really like "Market". Although it was extremely short and with no point, I loved the description and the flow of it.
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You didn't?
. Market was more like an exercise preparing for an exam. As you see with previous stories before this - I can't describe. This task actually forced me to describe, and of course, has benefitial repercussions.
As for Home Sweet Home... I sure hope that didn't really happen Sounds like it would be the worst day you've ever had. But I can't believe that you can't think of a single good day. There are so many good things in life.
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If one of the cathartic pieces models itself on real life events as closely as possible, this story would be it. I suppose at the time I couldn't think of a 'good' day, without thinking on the lines of 'look how much I have lost since that day'. So in fact a good days served as a brief interruption of happiness that must one day result in further loss.
Nightmare was rather awkward and dark though > A little on the morbid side if you ask me. Must have been a rather weird dream, and it's rather weird that at such a young age (You were young right?) you would already be thinking about death. I sure hope your mood has lightened up
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Nightmare was awkwardly written, I agree. When I had the dream, I was probably around 15. Not that young
, but enough to realise that I'm not a good person. Mortality was just dawning on me. Notice that the narrator then thought he should get a girlfriend
.
P.S. Yes, do try for Novelist. However, you can't get these points if you don't report in on TNG, lol.
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You didn't?
. Market was more like an exercise preparing for an exam. As you see with previous stories before this - I can't describe. This task actually forced me to describe, and of course, has benefitial repercussions.
As for Home Sweet Home... I sure hope that didn't really happen Sounds like it would be the worst day you've ever had. But I can't believe that you can't think of a single good day. There are so many good things in life.
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If one of the cathartic pieces models itself on real life events as closely as possible, this story would be it. I suppose at the time I couldn't think of a 'good' day, without thinking on the lines of 'look how much I have lost since that day'. So in fact a good days served as a brief interruption of happiness that must one day result in further loss.
Nightmare was rather awkward and dark though > A little on the morbid side if you ask me. Must have been a rather weird dream, and it's rather weird that at such a young age (You were young right?) you would already be thinking about death. I sure hope your mood has lightened up
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Nightmare was awkwardly written, I agree. When I had the dream, I was probably around 15. Not that young
, but enough to realise that I'm not a good person. Mortality was just dawning on me. Notice that the narrator then thought he should get a girlfriend
.
P.S. Yes, do try for Novelist. However, you can't get these points if you don't report in on TNG, lol.
23-Mar-2011 11:24:18 - Last edited on 23-Mar-2011 11:25:11 by Englishkid62
Lol, you can't claim points without commenting
23-Mar-2011 22:51:33
Lol, soz it had to be applied across the board
. Some people promise they'd comment but never did. I don't wanna deduct the points then
It's interesting you call those with blond hair and blue eyes 'foreigners'
. But yeah, I was being quite brutal with that part of myself still wanting to be 'English' then, with quite an absurd view of the future for myself.
Sold! actually is quite a horrendous piece of work
. But the explanation of why no one buys the house is expected to be that because of the child, customers were scared away. Though not Pete
. He bought the house regardless.
Yes, I think from then I'm more and more keen on sad endings that make an impact. My sister really liked Doll, actually. Maybe because I feel freaky to be watched in this way all the time... but hey, the doll had a crush on her master. Kinda sad, no?
. Some people promise they'd comment but never did. I don't wanna deduct the points then
It's interesting you call those with blond hair and blue eyes 'foreigners'
. But yeah, I was being quite brutal with that part of myself still wanting to be 'English' then, with quite an absurd view of the future for myself.
Sold! actually is quite a horrendous piece of work
. But the explanation of why no one buys the house is expected to be that because of the child, customers were scared away. Though not Pete
. He bought the house regardless.
Yes, I think from then I'm more and more keen on sad endings that make an impact. My sister really liked Doll, actually. Maybe because I feel freaky to be watched in this way all the time... but hey, the doll had a crush on her master. Kinda sad, no?
24-Mar-2011 15:20:03
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