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just finished the story =D

id give it a 9/10.. -1 because of some incorrect spelling and such. id go into a detailed rating but I'm too lazy to read the story again and grade everything as i go along

29-Jun-2008 07:20:22

lIIlIlIIIIIl

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10\10!!!!!

you use very good words. Half way through reading it two books fell off my shelf and i was up to the bit where everyone was dead in the inn. lol I was scared out off my wits

29-Jun-2008 07:32:54

Infinity A8

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bump

29-Jun-2008 12:25:05

HuntoFisho

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Carrotman you are truly a writer to be known!! I loved your story! I fancy myself a critic, not really on grammar, puncuation, spelling...etc, but on the story itself, its background, the character, text, dialouge...etc, haha. And your story is amazing, i love it and couldnt stop reading, even though its 2 in the morning lol. great story 10/10. i myself want to begin writing, and i hope you add me in game so i can share my thoughts with you on my actual book irl. Thank you, and keep it up. i also liked your next book so far, the fatal glitch. SEE YA.

30-Jun-2008 08:01:38

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