Oh man, I love this story. I kept on thinking that it was dumb and not very good, but I just re-read it and spruced it up a bit. It's great. And thanks again for posting, guys.
Well I'm again bogged down with how to get him to the tombstone. I wrote a really boring first page or two about his life. Do you have a pony express online, if you get my drift? I will send it your way.