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Very nice writing! I look forward to more of this. It's good to see you're still making stories.
As of this point, I declare this thread... Bookmarked!
--Guard

07-Jul-2009 07:11:15

07-Jul-2009 08:12:09 - Last edited on 07-Jul-2009 08:13:01 by [#KMKJKM4RY]

Thanks guard.

07-Jul-2009 16:31:47 - Last edited on 21-Mar-2011 23:13:36 by Smok Taunter

Bookmark.
The story is really good so far , but don´t make the fact I enjoy this story fool you thinking that I have a small attention span and don´t read longer things, as you said in your introduction, hehe.

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07-Jul-2009 20:42:33 - Last edited on 07-Jul-2009 20:57:17 by [#JHPXF2H51]

08-Jul-2009 02:24:46

09-Jul-2009 03:53:06

10-Jul-2009 02:03:19

12-Jul-2009 20:21:30

So far, I have only read the Opening, so not too much to comment upon, but all is good!
I really like how there are three younger characters, one with little experience, one with a medium amount of experience and one with a lot and then they have the older knight looking over them. It should prove to be exciting, with four somewhat diverse men, but at the same time, four somewhat similar characters.
I really can't wait to read more, so I will shorty, after I write a little more of my story.
Keep it up, Taunt.

13-Jul-2009 01:34:15

13-Jul-2009 12:44:33 - Last edited on 13-Jul-2009 12:55:09 by Ooozaki