Who said they were flaws? Could've it just been something I noticed? Could've it been something I'm complimenting for his sense of originality? Still still a good story.
18-Jul-2007 17:11:20
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19-Jul-2007 17:17:32
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Volke78
"Grabs abbysal whip. Whips the story repeatedly, as it runs back up to page one. Grabs rune claws. Sticks rune claws through story into ground, to slow the process of falling again."