This is a very good story. Although you could clearly see at the beginning of the story that it was the first thing you wrote, the increase of quality, especialy after Kashan's training in heaving, is great. It kept me up at night, because I wanted to read it.
I have to say I was confused at first though. This is the first unfinished story that has fully been posted on reserved post at the beginning of the thread.
So how much do you add for the story?
I have to say I was confused at first though. This is the first unfinished story that has fully been posted on reserved post at the beginning of the thread.
So how much do you add for the story?
03-Jan-2008 22:00:00
