chapter two, post three. "Its claws and canines were white as the bone they were" claws are not made out of bone. I would know, because I have three cats and I have to clip their claws. Claws are made of cartilage I believe. Not really sure though...But really good story, I'll keep searching for errors to help you
11-Nov-2007 17:49:23
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11-Nov-2007 17:52:23
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Might be enamel. Or ivory. Or paper mache.
Just focus on checking the newer posts. I combed over the first 19/20ths of the story, but if you really want to, double-checking is awesome too.
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