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CHAPTER SEVEN

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Soft sounds of animals fell upon them from every direction, forcing >>hem<< to concentrate even harder on staying near the path.

>>> Change ‘hem,’ to ‘them.’

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Landon gave grunt of approval before holding onto his backpack’s supports tightly.

>>> you need an ‘a,’ after ‘grunt.’

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