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This story was truly amazing and well written. The language that you use vividly described exactly how the scene appeared.
You gave the characters such depth and personality, that you could actually feel how they felt. The twists that appeared in the plot were magnificent, showing how some stories dont always have a happy ending. (Well, it's a horror story, so what can you expect? XD)
Considering the situations that all of them went through, they still had such life in them that really made them appear as if they were real people.
A great read, worthing of being published, by far.
Quite enjoyable by me, but maybe that's only because I like horror/action plots. Overjoyed to have come across this.
I'd be honoured to read another story written by you.
You gave the characters such depth and personality, that you could actually feel how they felt. The twists that appeared in the plot were magnificent, showing how some stories dont always have a happy ending. (Well, it's a horror story, so what can you expect? XD)
Considering the situations that all of them went through, they still had such life in them that really made them appear as if they were real people.
A great read, worthing of being published, by far.
Quite enjoyable by me, but maybe that's only because I like horror/action plots. Overjoyed to have come across this.
I'd be honoured to read another story written by you.
19-Aug-2010 08:44:07
Pigwig: I can't remember how you came across TFG either, but it wasn't your reviews because I remember seeing them but not applying for a review because I already knew you'd read and enjoyed it
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Melodee: Thank you very, very much!
If you're interested, I have links to my other stories on the first page (second post I think) and I, too, would be equally honoured to have them read
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Melodee: Thank you very, very much!
If you're interested, I have links to my other stories on the first page (second post I think) and I, too, would be equally honoured to have them read
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20-Aug-2010 11:22:32
Just read the epilogue. I've really enjoyed reading this story; you described the characters' emotions in detail and I especially liked the tie-in with Nightmare. I look forward to more stories from you
I now have a sudden urge to read Nightmare again...
I now have a sudden urge to read Nightmare again...
20-Aug-2010 20:11:10
Wow, thank you so much everyone! Sorry I haven't been on for a while, I've been busy with school.
@Zaox: You can copy my story to your phone, sure! (provided no plagiarism, which you already assured me of
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@Zaox: You can copy my story to your phone, sure! (provided no plagiarism, which you already assured me of
)
23-Sep-2010 09:19:34
good work as always can you make a new story now plzzzzzzzz
04-Nov-2010 01:54:58
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