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Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

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I can't find the bleedin' files anywhere, it's like they got zapped out of being. I'll have to rewrite.

Only problem is that I'm trying to write two stories and edit another while curling every day now, so I can't promise that that'll be tomorrow. I'm trying though, I really am. I think I'll concentrate on the edit now (shouldn't take too long), and then write the next bit for this.

28-Nov-2008 04:11:43

Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

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Okay. I've got a couple warnings here.

FIRST WARNING: This is not my best writing, seeing as I'm not really interested in either these characters or this plot. It is also fairly unedited, and I have not spent major amounts of time polishing it. So sorry, I wish I was interested, but I'm not.

SECOND WARNING: This next add contains suggestive situations. Nothing huge, but I thought I should warn about it. So: IT's THERE.

EDIT:

I've also switched up the diary design, purely to make things easier for myself. It's not hugely different.

SECOND EDIT:

Words (or sentences) between stars are in italics. So in the sentence: "'The food was *perfect*,' said Amy." 'Perfect' would be in italics. I know it looks terrible, but it's the best I can think of.

02-Dec-2008 18:24:40 - Last edited on 02-Dec-2008 18:35:15 by Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

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We reached Varrock this morning. It’s large and complicated, but that did*’t bother us at all.

Immediately upon arrival, we made for the ‘Blue Boar’ inn. It wasn’t exactly high class, nor was it especially clean, but it served our purpose and we saw signs advertising a dance there that evening. More people, more information, and Legend and I intended to take advantage of that fact.

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It wasn’t long before the first partygoers began to show up. I straightened Legend’s shirt----blue, navy was always a good color for him----while he buttoned my dress in back. My dress fell gracefully to the floor, a dark forest-green satin that I knew showed me off to best advantage while being easy to move in. That I considered imperative, for, if a situation arose, I needed to be free to defend myself.

Moving to the cracked mirror, I made an experimental twirl and the dress followed perfectly, flowing about me in a river of shining fabric. Legend grinned beside me, hooking his thumbs into his pockets. “Shall we go?”

I returned his smile. “Certainly.”

-Glory.

02-Dec-2008 18:27:24

Anne Lauten

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My back is more painful than I thought it would be. This sleeping in tents cannot at all compare to my bed at home, what with tree-roots and beetles and rocks----there are always rocks, no matter where you move the tent to. Once we moved it four times before giving up.

No more highwaymen (or highwaywomen) so far. Just walking, eating, and sleeping. I’ll be happy when we get to Varrock.

-Ravana

02-Dec-2008 18:28:43

Anne Lauten

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The dance was hot and crowded, women and men pushing past each other to the bar as even more couples strutted their stuff-----or in most cases, lack thereof----on the dance floor. Most of the women seemed uncomfortable, their movements stiff and awkward. I shook my head. When you wore a dress cinched as tight as was fashionable, you had to expect some discomfort.

Meanwhile, Glory twirled across the dance floor, paired with first one man, then another----all were vying for her hand. And with good reason. Besides having mastered each new dance skill Mother gave us, she was also one of the most beautiful girls there.

Only a few others could compete on her level, one of whom seemed unusually wrapped up in her dancing partners. As though forgetting the rest of the world, she clung tightly to each man fortunate enough to accompany her, gazing up at them, her thin fingers holding surprisingly strongly to their arms.

I watched.

Strangely, though her footwork appeared faultless, no man chose to dance again with the pale girl in red. Each in turn bowed before making their exit, either to the bar, or to another prospective partner. She looked slightly more unhappy at each one, until her pretty face was set into an almost-scowl. Glancing over at my sister, her frown deepened. Glory’s smile lit up the room, brilliantly outshining the girl in red. As her twin, I knew it was all a facade, but the men were attracted like moths to a flame.

I caught the pale girl’s eye as she turned, and instantly her smile was back. She really was a pretty girl, small and fine-boned, almost delicate-looking with big green eyes. Glossy black hair fell down her back, wavy and so dark it shone with blue tints in the light, her deep-cut crimson gown accenting perfectly pale skin. I returned her smile, slipping though the crowd to her side.

“Might I have this dance?” I murmured as the band struck up again, raising her hand for a polite kiss.

02-Dec-2008 18:31:01

Anne Lauten

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“I insist upon it,” she replied, voice sweet and musical. Her lips were turned up in what at first was a false smile, but, as the dance ran its course, turned gradually to genuine pleasure. Dark lashes lowered to shield her eyes as she swayed, leaning into me.

Across the floor, Glory looked up, sending a faint note of question though our mental link. I reassured her. *I’m good.*

*Soon?* Glory asked.

*I do not know.*

With that she seemed content, and I returned my attention to the exquisite creature in my arms. The dance was just ending, and she tilted her pretty face up to me, voice low and admiring. “You’re a wonderful dancer.”

“Include yourself as well in that description,” I said. “A beautiful dancer . . . and a beautiful girl.”

Her innocence was a masterful act. “Do you think so?”

“I *know* so.”

The pale girl tipped back a little to regard me, her eyes gleaming and mischievous. “Would you like to consider this discussion . . . in my room?”

I nodded, allowing myself to be led away. On the floor, I felt Glory’s eyes on me and grinned through our mental link.

-Legend

02-Dec-2008 18:31:25 - Last edited on 02-Dec-2008 18:36:31 by Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

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I focused my attention on my partner. Luckily he hadn’t noticed the brief exchange of glances between Legend and I, and for that I was thankful. Men do not tend to be pleased when their partner lets her eyes roam, especially when a man like Legend is in the room. Few others can compare to my brother.

As the music faded away, I curtsied to my partner. He bowed, asking politely for the next dance as well, but I pleaded a headache. With one last smile, I vanished after Legend.

I had heard nothing at all through our link.

I knew exactly what to do.

-Glory

02-Dec-2008 18:37:51

Anne Lauten

Anne Lauten

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I held the door, letting the pale girl go first. This was her room, and she had not locked it. Good.

Once through she spun to face me, green eyes bright, an expression of sweet impishness on her doll-like face. I laid a hand on her shoulder, and, interestingly, she did not move away or tense at all. Instead, running fine fingers across my arms, she bent her surprising strength upon my frame.

I let her bring me to her level without too much resistence. Once there, she pressed soft lips to mine before lifting her head, moving slowly with just the slightest touch of hesitation. I closed my eyes, and her breath ghosted lightly over my neck moments before twin skewers drove into what seemed like the very depths of my body.

It was agonizingly painful, and I put a hand to the wall just to stay upright, my hand uncooperative and trembling.

My eyes misted into dark.

-Legend

02-Dec-2008 18:39:26

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