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Amoraten

Amoraten

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It is quite amazing to read how an evolutionary poetic piece as such as this develops- ideas seem to ebb and flow- I am looking forward to see how this poem develops

Poetically, this is an utterly wonderful endeavour Croce- I can't wait to see how this winding snake winds through the grass :D

05-Oct-2010 23:46:31

Twid

Twid

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Sorry Croce, I've been gone a lot lately due to school commitments, and I haven't found the time to jump back in to poetry. I'm a bit rusty, but I shall give this a shot again. Sorry again for the delay.
Continuing from:
Sunbeam dream unseen
Drifting on the leafy seas
Shattering day dream

As I wake and look through trees
Winter's breath sates Summer's breeze

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For once, I wonder
of the endless loop called time
lose myself in thought

Thoughts twist and turn in my mind
I see the beauty of God
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How is it I ask,
that we come to be on Earth?
By God? Or science?

God makes beauty all around
Yet science is logical

06-Oct-2010 06:38:59

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