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19-May-2010 00:45:45

Thanks very much, Mecha, for your valuable contributions and for advertising Legacy of the Mora - it's a truly wonderful project which I hope to expand to a full size renga of 36 stanzas. So far, 15 and counting.

19-May-2010 21:09:37

23-May-2010 10:20:11

Hello Croce

Hope this follows on from the last post...

Childlike wonderment
(In the mystery of life)
A rose- heaven's scent.

A train of thought masking strife
A reborn child's revenant.

^^ my apologies if this dosen't suit (please amend as you see fit it is the first time I have added to something liek this ;P )

I've always thought we lose that sense of childlike wonderment as we grow older...

24-May-2010 18:48:24

25-May-2010 07:51:09

28-May-2010 08:38:45

Nice.

28-May-2010 22:00:27

31-May-2010 14:14:55

Thanks for the contribution, Mecha. I should probably contribute more myself.

31-May-2010 17:54:26

"Black against the pall
of cloud, a hand reaches out
Fear holds me in thrall.

Some dread clouds my thoughts without-
Spinning threads within self doubt."

^^ hope that fits the last post

Ooo love this poem (ie Legacy of Mora- edit)

31-May-2010 23:56:50 - Last edited on 01-Jun-2010 18:00:41 by Amoraten