I remember your name. welcome back
04-Jun-2010 08:32:22
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Gielinor and Darsys
Quick find code: 49-50-274-57545119
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT rosh is back no more pages full of bumps
13-Jun-2010 16:07:05
I copy-and-pasted it all. I'm assuming that all of your story is posted on the reserves.
18-Jun-2010 22:57:40
Yes thats correct.
Thanks Reegena
Thanks Reegena
19-Jun-2010 13:55:42
Hiya! I am Reegena, the head reviewer at The Reviewing Stage, and I just reviewed your story! (Or what there is of it.
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Grading Rubric: Regular Story
Plot: 40/50
Character Development: 20/25
Description: 20/25
Grammar: 45/50
Spelling: 18/20
Cliché? No (+5)
Did I Like it? Yes (+10)
Sub-Total: 158/175
Bonus Points: 1 I have to admit, this story was quite original.
Total: 159/175
Pass
Your Ranking: Secondary Role (155 - 169)
Comments: Very unique. Although I know it was my doing, your grade would have been higher, especially in plot, if more of your story had been posted. Otherwise, there were only a few simple spelling and grammar errors, probably just due to typos. It reminded me a bit of "The Giver", was that supposed to happen? (I like this one a lot more, though.)
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Grading Rubric: Regular Story
Plot: 40/50
Character Development: 20/25
Description: 20/25
Grammar: 45/50
Spelling: 18/20
Cliché? No (+5)
Did I Like it? Yes (+10)
Sub-Total: 158/175
Bonus Points: 1 I have to admit, this story was quite original.
Total: 159/175
Pass
Your Ranking: Secondary Role (155 - 169)
Comments: Very unique. Although I know it was my doing, your grade would have been higher, especially in plot, if more of your story had been posted. Otherwise, there were only a few simple spelling and grammar errors, probably just due to typos. It reminded me a bit of "The Giver", was that supposed to happen? (I like this one a lot more, though.)
20-Jun-2010 02:53:18
Bump.
21-Jun-2010 17:18:00
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