Chapter 3.1 is up and posted!!
03-Sep-2009 21:40:55 - Last edited on 03-Sep-2009 21:59:03 by Cicobe1
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Yes!!!!!
03-Sep-2009 22:11:30
Woo! Chapter 3.1 was a nice read!
What's going to happen to him next??
What's going to happen to him next??
03-Sep-2009 22:20:04
I don't know.
What's going to happen to him next?
This is all part of my awesome plan that is building up to a huge scenario that is going to leave you all shocked.
What's going to happen to him next?
This is all part of my awesome plan that is building up to a huge scenario that is going to leave you all shocked.
03-Sep-2009 23:49:13
Very cool.
04-Sep-2009 00:11:39
I thought it was okay, in my opinion. My vocabulary wasn't up there, and I think I needed to have more description.
I'll slowly build that up as I start writing regularly again. I'll add a new chapter as soon as I can.
I'll slowly build that up as I start writing regularly again. I'll add a new chapter as soon as I can.
04-Sep-2009 00:45:18
I like description.
04-Sep-2009 01:16:43
"He ran forward, blood gushing out of his gut, still laughing maniacally. Another arrow was shot, hitting Glendol in the leg. He stumbled and fell to the floor, and started to have a massive seizure. He rolled around, spitting foam on the ground."
That's so gross.
Apparently I still have much more to read
...LOL @ Iban getting owned.
That's so gross.
Apparently I still have much more to read
...LOL @ Iban getting owned.
06-Sep-2009 01:12:01 - Last edited on 06-Sep-2009 01:44:29 by KH E A R T S
Thanks, Ruben.
09-Sep-2009 21:11:56
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