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Aeraie

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Hehehehe.

19-Jul-2011 20:07:02

Bashunia

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I so thought that I posted that, then I was like "Wtf...I don't have wi-fi...! Owait."

19-Jul-2011 20:45:23

Aeraie

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Bash needs a moment. *hands twix*

19-Jul-2011 20:59:30

Aeraie

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New story out- Phoenix Rising

19-Jul-2011 21:30:55

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My answer to your question: Why, everything! -.-

20-Jul-2011 01:51:19

Aeraie

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Thanks, Poly :p

20-Jul-2011 02:09:51

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Poller5

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I like the symbolism of Phoenix Rising, with the land being reborn just like a phoenix, Aeraie, but I found the whole paragraph describing the bird somewhat overwrought and awkward; it seemed like you were trying to say as much about the bird as possible in as few words as possible, and it didn't work all that well for me.

20-Jul-2011 04:42:30