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The Level

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Hey this is great :) Really like that the descriptions give the story flow as well as making me see a picture in my head of what's happening. I look forward to seeing more of your writing.

I already love the interplay you have between your characters, even though the story is still very young. I'm not sure who the main character is yet, but I'm sure when that becomes evident I'll already be rooting for him or her!

13-Mar-2013 12:50:33 - Last edited on 13-Mar-2013 13:13:57 by The Level

Last Prophet

Last Prophet

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I actually intended the mage to be the main character, although given the plans I have for the story, the three characters in the first section are all probably going to be considered main characters. This is going to be a rather tragic story...

And yeah D: the short's in its infancy right now. In its current state it has NO plot although I do have a storyline in mind, I assure you ^^
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13-Mar-2013 19:48:29

Last Prophet

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It was intended to fit within a fixed word limit - the amount of which, at this point, I've completely forgotten. So I guess it will be a longer short story than most but I don't plan on making this any longer than it really needs to be...
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13-Mar-2013 22:15:42 - Last edited on 13-Mar-2013 22:32:12 by Last Prophet

Last Prophet

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Oh, as a rather important note: the story follows canon loosely and none of the religious aspects should be taken seriously. All characters except the three main ones are real, though Kilisa was never revealed to be a prophet and the title Second Judge is one of my own machinations.
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13-Mar-2013 22:36:27

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