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MJT2-0
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Short Stories
Right, joining this merry band of writers helping writers, I'll be writing a 'your first short story' guide. First off: if ever in this guide I make the mistake of setting a rule of must’s/cannot**, break it, just for the hell of it. Writing is creativity, and that is something that is hard to do when fearing the iron fist of The Rules.

Now: short stories, by definition, have no real definition. You can find a dozen different sources and most if not all would disagree about what defines a short story and/or what length constitutes a short story. Just to add to that confusion, I'm going to say a short story is anywhere between six words and infinite words.

A short story, just like writing in general, is anything you want it to be. I was once told to learn what I could about writing and then forget it; that way, you're never chained down to what you've learned and can stay dynamic, write whatever's on your heart at any time without having to worry about what you've learned something should or shouldn't be.

The beginning of a short story, as with any other, must be captivating (try breaking that rule ), so it can serve as a hook. However, because the story is a mile shorter than a novel or a novella, it's usually the beginning of the story that sets the mood or atmosphere for all the rest of it. An example from Roshind*'s excellent romantic short story, Love Thy Neighbour, follows:

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I don't know when it was that I first fell in love with her. It snuck up on me like one of those sudden summer rain showers, when one minute the sky is clear and blue, and then the next thing you know its pouring rain. It leaves as suddenly as it comes, but afterwards everything looks new and clean. Even though there was nothing wrong before the rain, everything is somehow better.

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If you read the whole story, I believe you'll find that all of it is as well written as this paragraph, and is also in the same or a similar atmosphere. The first paragraph sets the mood. Of course, this particular story has loads more qualities, but in an effort to avoid making this a 'how to praise Roshie' guide, I'll let the example stand on its own. I trust you did notice the point, though, that thing about setting the atmosphere early, because you usually don't have room to do it later?

Another thing, one which most people see as a short story's hallmark, is the surprising twist. Examples include, but are not excluded to: almost every short story ever written.

To further that list, you can see Dreamweaver's 'Shaggy Dog Story' and Jacme Slash's 'Writer's Block', two excellent short stories which end in a surprising twist. On the other hand, twists are hard to manage, and so many writers opt to write more straight-forward stories. Look around on the forums and you'll find loads of short story collections which feature stories like that.

I won't say much about the surprising twist because it has been done in a million different ways, and can be done in a million more. It's really up to you, the writer, to find a twist that fits your story and style.

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As for genre, your short story can be anything. There is Horror (I think Whitewolf dabbled a little bit with that genre in his thread 'The Anthology'), Comedy (Dreamweaver's Assorted Tales features some funnies), Romance (Give it up for Roshie's 'A Selection of Shorts!' and, if it fits your definition of a short, 'Outlander') and of course Tragedy, a genre of which I remember no writer off the top of my head. Basically what I'm saying is you can write anything, just like with novels and novellas. Don't limit yourself to just Comedy or surprising-twist ending because you've read short stories of that type.

Plot: some people think that you don't need a plot in a short story because, well, it's short. While they're usually right about the short part, they're entirely wrong about the plot part (I can't believe I made an accidental rhyme). Your short always has a plot to it: it might be simpler, more straight-forward, and/or shorter than the plot/s and sub-plot/s in your novel and novella, but there is always a plot. A short story is just like a "normal" story, with an exposition, rising action, cli/max, falling action and a resolution.

I think I'll end this guide on a general, less short-specific note: to improve, write a lot. Even if you write garbage, be proud of your garbage. Most people can't even be proud of that. Also, you don't always have to have the whole story in your head *before* you start writing it. Sometimes the best plots, twists, and characters pop up into your mind as you write.

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