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Capt, I dunno if you remember me telling you about my story when Gielinor hits an Ice Age, a long time ago, or if you even remember me but I just wanted to let you know that it's out, under the name "Desert and Ice", "DesertScape and the Ice Age" just *id*'t seem right in the end. I've only released the prologue as experience has told me that it's a bad idea to release pages of the story before getting any reviews, so I'll see how the prologue hits before gradually releasing the rest and in the mean-time working on what I already have .

11-May-2009 19:10:26

12-May-2009 01:00:12 - Last edited on 30-Aug-2016 19:49:55 by Prat

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12-May-2009 23:18:16

13-May-2009 03:03:20

13-May-2009 22:34:48

Lol, yes, it's been a day, but I'll assume that you're busy as you're an excellent writer and you probably are .
Also, I've written chapter 5, and will shortly upload parts of the story to [says the name of a certain fan-fiction website.]

14-May-2009 18:30:51

15-May-2009 22:26:36

Wuh, you say me has bda gramar? Dat sooo not tru.
Lol, thanks for the review, Capt, been a big help, and has helped me to realize what a crap grammaticis* I can be at times . Still, if this were a story going for print, Grammar would be a number one priority, as this is only the internet, I prioritize ... oh, who am I kidding I just write for the sake of writing I'm not conscious about grammar issues or sentence structure (I dearly should be ...)

15-May-2009 23:37:08

Well, then it was pretty solid. The only problem is it didn't do well for me since it kinda messed up the description at times.
-- Chek

15-May-2009 23:48:36