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Lokintr
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Lokintr

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OK, two short chapters. Trying to advance the plot somewhat. See if you can spot a theme in that rather a lot of description has been devoted to two of these things so far, and at least two more to come. That is, if anyone cares :P

25-Jun-2011 20:43:53

Arkkataka

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I'm reading, but frankly I can't follow any plot so I'm reading without any real direction. I will say you have great discription. I think you should work to pull the plot together a little more because it's very confusing and at this point I'm going to have to reread earlier parts to understand the story. Something that I don't think someone should need to do.

26-Jun-2011 02:58:33 - Last edited on 26-Jun-2011 03:00:13 by Arkkataka

Lokintr
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Lokintr

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Sorry I haven't updated recently. Arkk, just want to say thanks for your continued support, and I realise that it must be confusing, but I am planning for this to be quite long, so the plot takes a while to develop.

Something resembling writers' block as well, so it will take a while for me to continue this. Sorry to Arkk and anyone else reading.

02-Jul-2011 13:47:38

Lokintr
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Lokintr

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Why thank you! I keep rereading this and trying to work out where it was going, as it is something I would like to continue at some point, but it was very kind of you to stop by. You too, Snowbuster. Thanks guys! :D

22-May-2012 15:20:04

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