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it's funny..but you should copy and paste it into a dif thread all together without the spam..and those "perfect" english speakers...if you don't like it you don't have to say anything...just go to a diferent thread..but yeah i give it a 9/10 hilarious..just hard to read considering all the spam..by the way..Veracs my favorite so far. But yeah..don't worry about the kids who say your story is bad..they are (A) angry because yoursis better than theirs (B) have nothing else to do so they put people down (C) Are Uber nerds that think they are better than everyone else..exept Aleet..he did a little constructive critism but all in all Great story..you should try paragraph format next time though i'll be sure to read it.

19-Sep-2006 20:40:27

setmine

setmine

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3/10

I've read up to part 6 and I think overall, it's pretty pathetic. This stuff you call "funny" is the stuff that my 10-year old cousin would think is funny.

All the old comments that losers still think are cool like "Smart one" or "Suuuuuuure" are all in here. And frankly, I hate it.

I give you those 3 points out of 10 just because if I were 9 years old, I might laugh slightly.

Just slightly though so don't get your hopes up.

24-Sep-2006 02:08:40 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2006 02:13:00 by setmine

Eilidh

Eilidh

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10/10 for they effort, very funny :)

by the way, aleet and trey or who ever the heck you are, at 12 or 13 with that kind of vocab makes you complete nerds. im 15 and from what you say, you talk like your and adult, yeah you might think its good, but you know, it makes you sound like nerds. buck is 10 and is just trying to make a good story, i might not be perfect but he is 10 for christ sakes. leave him alone. you gave your rating, had your argument so just get lost

24-Sep-2006 02:34:23 - Last edited on 24-Sep-2006 02:55:56 by Eilidh

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