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Buckeye91011

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--------------part 20, the new helmet---------


torag: jeez i'm bored of this helmet...

*torag smiths a new helmet and puts diamonds and jeweles in it*

torag: there!

noobs: he's got a new helmet let's get him!!!!
(or in noob language: hes gowt anw hlm lts git im!)

torag: AAAHHHH!!!!!!

noobs: CHAAAARRRGGEEE!!!!!!

torag: RUN FOR YOUR LIIIIIIFE!!!!!

*noobs attack torag and torag easily owns 'em*

torag: oooohhhhh.....

ahrim: you idiot you're torag, you can own almost anything, except me...

verac: poke!

ahrim: I'LL SHOW YOU POKE VERAC!!!

*ahrim throws a snowball at him*

*verac explodes*

ahrim: oookkaaaaaayyy.....

noob: lol i can pwn u karil wit me 20 mag

karil: excuse me..?

noob: i can pwn u
(jeez it's hard for me to type like that lol)

karil: ranged is supposed to kill mages

noob: o ya i got 72 rang

karil: i looked you up on high-scores you only have 42 ranged...

noob: obvisly u didnt, cuz i got 43 rang!

karil: lol i just proved you wrong!!

noob: o ya yo mamas so fat she cat fit thro the bak dor

karil: cat....?

noob: cant....duh noob..

noob2: o dont tell ne1, but im tony haek

karil: oh really? well you spelled your name wrong then

noob2: oopps i kep forgotting hw to spel me name

karil: okay then, what's the best brand of skateboarding shoes?

noob2: uhh....nike?

karil: LOL VANS ARE BETTER THAN THAT!!!!

noob2: lol

karil: just leave...

noob: phr33 st00f pl0x!

karil: shut up and go away!

guthan: what was that all about..?

dharok: i dunno, but torag has a new helmet let's get him!!

torag: AHHH!!!!!

(TO BE CONTINUED)

23-Aug-2006 03:39:22 - Last edited on 23-Aug-2006 03:40:57 by Buckeye91011

Buckeye91011

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i only think the end of that was funny, but, i'm just really tired and don't feel like laughing mch right now

(I had 2 days in a row of 2 hour football practice, and we had to put everything to the limit..TO THE HIGHEST OF OUR ABILITIES I AM SO WORN OUT THIS IS KILLING ME TYPING THIS!!!OW!!!)

23-Aug-2006 03:43:55

Buckeye91011

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uhh...squidmusher.....it isn't supposed to have action or really a plot, nor a description IT'S COMEDY!!!

DER DUH DER


unless like, you're a nerd/english teacher/ 40 year old weirdo who has no life

23-Aug-2006 04:24:40 - Last edited on 23-Aug-2006 04:26:43 by Buckeye91011

Buckeye91011

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jeez look at the freaking title....spammer...-.-

also it is clearly stated on the first page...dude you seriously need to check this over again rather than take one glimpse and then rate it terribly..-.-

23-Aug-2006 04:25:31 - Last edited on 23-Aug-2006 04:30:28 by Buckeye91011

CP_lHnZ4I5

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After reading the first page over, I realize you posted that you wouldn't have action in it. Sorry about that complaint. However, the plot and comedy are still fair game. A comedy story CAN and SHOULD have two things you don't have: Plot and something funny! Also, 1/10 on originality. This is just as good as the other twelve barrows brothers script comedy stories I've seen in this forum. If you need an example of a comedy story with a plot and action that is also funny, read Qazwsx3740'* Revolt Lover Series.

23-Aug-2006 13:46:19

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