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anroo1293

anroo1293

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buck, dont worry, this thread only has 200 posts, you've got a lot more posts before you'd have to start a new thread. dont worry. after this story, try to come up with a plot for a new story, a normal one. not script format, i really have nothing against it. some people don't really like script format stories, others do. if you wanna write a normal story and wanna keep writing script format, go ahead. if you dont exactly know how to write like a normal action and adventure story, look at the thread 'The Academy of Literature' its sorta like a guild, you can learn how to write certain things there, like comedy, action and adventure, horror stories, all sorts of things. good luck, and once more, sorry for spamming your thread.

good luck with your story =)

25-Jul-2006 05:36:06

[#AEVXVTHLB]

[#AEVXVTHLB]

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honestly who is this "12 year old" he should **** who talks perfect english at our age? and for the teacher...3 words GET A LIFE for u to go out reading storys giving them low marks cuz there not to ur standards well...TOUGH...the whole idea of a story is to entertain. he said it was a funny story not a gramaticly correct story WHO CARES ABOUT GRAMMER??? u say ur not arguein so y not just shut up??? and let him finish the story some ppl actually like it! its odviously not good enough for u so y do u keep talking? just to stay around to argue with ppl? oops u might not understand that. i left the vowels out. sorry "people" there its all good and correct**** way ya ur rite u gave it a low rating but ur rationg was wrong mabey u just dont think its funny but to grade it on vocabulary and grammer thats just not rite so do us all a favor and GET A LIFE!!!

btw great story i hope u finish!!!
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25-Jul-2006 09:15:07 - Last edited on 25-Jul-2006 09:15:57 by [#AEVXVTHLB]

[#AEVXVTHLB]

[#AEVXVTHLB]

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25-Jul-2006 09:19:16 - Last edited on 25-Jul-2006 09:21:05 by [#AEVXVTHLB]

Buckeye91011

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--------part 11--------(sorry for the long amount of spam)

ahrim: ribbit

*guys are still in cananda*

verac: I LOVE YOU GUYS!

*verac starts hugging everyone and they all become warm*

dharok: ooookay that was weird

karil: well back to our house....

*ahrim turns back to human and teleports them all except torag to their house*

torag: NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

ahrim: NO MORE TORAG!! BRING ON THE BEER!!

dharok: where's verac?

*verac back at canada making yellow snowcones*

torag: hey free snowcones!!

verac: dude you can have 'em they taste weird

torag: W00T!!

*torag eats all snowcones*

torag: i think i gotta go pody.....

*verac runs back to house*

verac: i think torag has to go pody now but the porta-poddy is all the way back at our house he'll never make it!!

all but torag: MUAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!

torag: ahh sweet releif....

*torag walks back to house*

torag: i need to wash my undies....

all but torag: eeeww!

torag: i coulda sworn these were white when i bought them...now they're yellow...ah well

*puts them in washing bowl and it explodes*

all but torag: RUUNNN!!!!! UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE EATEN ALIVE BY TORAG'S UNDIES' GHOST!!

torag: oooohhhhh pretty yellow colors

evil undies: YOU WILL PAY TORAG! YOU WILL PAAAYY

*undies dissapear and bros. have to buy a new washing bowl*

verac: THAT WAS MY FAVORITE WASHING BOWL!!!! NOOO!!!!

25-Jul-2006 15:20:11 - Last edited on 28-Jul-2006 20:29:17 by Buckeye91011

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