I'm agreeing with westo. look, i've nothing against script format stories, but honestly, they get annoying. no offence is ment man, but there are too many script format stories. try writing a real story, use more of an extensive vocabulary, have a plot, have characters, be original, try to spell correctly, use correct grammar. i understand full well that this is a comedy, but you can write a comedy without script format.
25-Jul-2006 05:18:51