I'm sorry, but none of your posts are humourous in any way, except part 15 and 16, but you didn't create them. Around half the time it is just people screaming and being idiotic. The other half is people blowing up or fighting. In my opinion, you should stop these posts right now, pick up a dictionary, go through every post you have made, correct the grammar/spelling issues and start a new story, checking every word you are unsure of in the dictionary. Make sure to use correct grammar and most importantly, if you are going to write a comedy, at least make it slightly humourous. If you expect to be praised for that random drivel, you are badly mistaken.
02-Dec-2009 17:42:59
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