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Poke Tycoon1

Poke Tycoon1

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I have one now.
Chapter 20 something.
Ahraim: Hey guys i found this new spell in the Nooby Spellbook called Teleport ape Atoll.
Dharok: what the hell is an "ape"
Karil: Lets find out!
Torag:no..... i think it has apes.
Ahraim; THATS WHY GOING TO FIND OUT WHAT IT IS!!!!!!!
Torag:
Verac: Lets go. I think they have cookies!
Ahriam: Ok. I think so. Torag theres probly chicks!
Torag and Dharok: LETS GO!!!!!
They teleport and get attacked by a big black demon.
Verac: I THINK IN GETTING MAD!!!
Ahraim: good for you. let them demon eat you and blow up.
Verac: OK!!!!
Dharok, look at all those little short things hitting it! im gogin to hit them
*dharok attack the gnomes and screams "stop hitting Ribbit!*
Ahraim tleports him inside the demon.For Sardomion dharok stop it!
Guthan: Why did you let verac get eaten when you could have just teleported him?
Ahraim: Its not as funny.
Guthan: Good point.
Torag: NOOOOO!!!!!!!! I see banna trees!!!!!!!
Karil: YAY!!!*tosses him in to the trees*
*torag:RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Karil: well he didnt do anything.
Poke tycoon1: Ill finish it later!

16-Jun-2008 16:20:22

15thpaladin

15thpaladin

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i reread the story, and now when i think about it the humor is ok not the best but it could do better :| still i will give you credit for the effort it's funny at some points. :D
8.5/10
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\Laughing is good for you!/

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