ok here's what i have to say....you are very creative and it's funny, but it is totally random and doesn't flow. not to sound like some grammar teacher but it doesn't go well together.
my rating:3/10
It isn't supposed to obtain a plot. Where do you think us 11 year olds get our laughs?
Anyway, if you want a story with a plot made by >ME< (A.K.A Buckeye91011) then go to the story This is the Way the World Ends.
Quick find code: 49-50-309-40195597
I started it on buckeye, and am continuing it on this account.
It has a plot!
Must I repeat?
It has a plot!
It is my second story, I've made, though the first one died. This one is much more successful.
dude it stinks i gave it a 2/10000000 you stink at writing, try drawing you noob
thumbs down v but at the beginning i liked this part: ~~~~~~~~^~v~^~~~~~~
18-May-2007 02:23:21
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Yudel, you're breaking the rules. Stop flaming. This thread is on a small string with all the flaming with the nerd war thingy. Don't flame me. Could I have a mod hide his post?