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Zamorak's True Son
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I have only read our part so far Mb. Very Nice!
On me, I have a few things to say.
First, I can see you are veering between the two sides of me, the funny side and the side that means business. I would like you to stick firmly to the side that means business, you can show the funny side, but not too much.
Very good so far though.
Oh, and it's not fair killing George off already.
You gotta resurrect him or something (well to this story, you are god
.
Oh, and as for my armour, does it relate to anything in the actual game?
Interesting chaos between the leaders already.
On me, I have a few things to say.
First, I can see you are veering between the two sides of me, the funny side and the side that means business. I would like you to stick firmly to the side that means business, you can show the funny side, but not too much.
Very good so far though.
Oh, and it's not fair killing George off already.
You gotta resurrect him or something (well to this story, you are god
.
Oh, and as for my armour, does it relate to anything in the actual game?
Interesting chaos between the leaders already.
21-Jun-2007 21:11:03
Yay, read it all, very nice.
21-Jun-2007 22:12:54
Name: Bryan (simple human name)
Age: around 18
Race: human
Good or evil: good
Combat Specialty: (mage, range, melee) range but has a white sort of defender for umm well defending himself in close quarters fighting
Other skills specialty: good agility and enough magical expeirence to teleport to falador
Appearance: about 5'9, short blonde hair, wears a black cavalier when fighting as well
Weaponry: mage short bow with rune arrows
Armor: white dragon hide with a gold saradomin symbol on the front, also carries a small saradomin prayer book with him at all times
Brief history: the youngest leader of the falador elite rangers. left falador in order to find the best way of protecting the way of saradomin.
good story i look forward to reading more chapters
Age: around 18
Race: human
Good or evil: good
Combat Specialty: (mage, range, melee) range but has a white sort of defender for umm well defending himself in close quarters fighting
Other skills specialty: good agility and enough magical expeirence to teleport to falador
Appearance: about 5'9, short blonde hair, wears a black cavalier when fighting as well
Weaponry: mage short bow with rune arrows
Armor: white dragon hide with a gold saradomin symbol on the front, also carries a small saradomin prayer book with him at all times
Brief history: the youngest leader of the falador elite rangers. left falador in order to find the best way of protecting the way of saradomin.
good story i look forward to reading more chapters
22-Jun-2007 02:44:16
Hi. Just read your story and it's very good indeed. I really enjoyed reading it; there were some very good fihgt scenes, so nice job, mate. A bit dissapointed that my character snuffed it so soon. I am beginning to think this story reflects reality a bit, with Reaper hating me and all
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22-Jun-2007 20:49:59
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