Wow, I read this story again and I was shocked by how different it was back then when I read it. It has a great plot and everything, but I understand why you think it's so bad. I checked my comments on this post from years back and I almost want to punch myself they're so horribly spelled and grammatically incorrect. Oh well, my nostalgic visit is done, see you in another story!
09-Jun-2012 06:44:19