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Book of Trials, Chapter Two

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Deltaslug

Deltaslug

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Nice story, but quick suggestion:
Only use 1 thread for all of your chapters instead of supporting say 5 or 6.

You will only have ot worry about maintaining/bumping 1 thread.

While it might be nice to see a little added life to this forum with new threads coming in ... all of your stories are really a continuation of the same one.

If each of your stories were truly stand alone ... (ie a comedy and a horror) ... then by all means, keep the threads separate.

28-Jan-2014 15:31:44

Sigilius

Sigilius

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First of all, thanks for reading! :)

I understand your concern, but I think this serial format really works. For one, my chapters by and large tend to be longer than most of the one-shot stories on here. This means that it's incredibly difficult to reserve posts for the future, because the scale of this story is actually quite large.

Second, this way people can click on my name and easily locate chapters in my recent posts, without having to dig through pages and pages to find the next chapter, if there even is one. And while these do follow a similar plot theme, they can be read on their own. If I'm in violation of a Story Forum rule (and I don't think I am), then I'll gladly consolidate, but for the reasons enumerated above, I do prefer this format.

Thanks again for reading! :)

28-Jan-2014 21:25:51

Sigilius

Sigilius

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Pupppy said :
Awesome tale again, and the Watcher's (was it a daemonheim's seeker?) taste for poems and any sort of activity gave it an ever entertainment :)


Thank you, Pupppy. :) As always your review is encouraging. Yes, I did imagine it as some variant of a Daemonheim seeker. I'm glad you noticed the light layer of comic relief I was going for with the Watcher's point of view.

I'll do my best to keep this story updated for readers like you. :)

Thanks again.

01-Feb-2014 02:21:04

Sigilius

Sigilius

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WolfsQuill said :
This story is excellent. I love the completely different take on the lore that you've got going, and your prose is gorgeous.


Thank you so much Quill. :) I just think Azzanadra's story has a lot of potential. And as for my prose, I'm flattered.

09-Feb-2014 09:51:14

Sigilius

Sigilius

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Work on Part 3 is now underway! I took a break to evaluate incoming information from Mahjarrat Memories and Fate of the Gods. I will continue this storyline in spite of the fact of its alternative origin story for Azzanadra, and I hope you all enjoy it. ^^ Keep your ear to the ground for the next installment.

27-Apr-2014 00:11:11

Deltaslug

Deltaslug

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Sigilius said :
Work on Part 3 is now underway! I took a break to evaluate incoming information from Mahjarrat Memories and Fate of the Gods. I will continue this storyline in spite of the fact of its alternative origin story for Azzanadra, and I hope you all enjoy it. ^^ Keep your ear to the ground for the next installment.


huzzah

27-Apr-2014 22:03:26

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