Just a quick FYI, and I hope this doesn't get me disqualified lol but I think it needs to be said! For a story to be interesting, it needs a mystery and/or an ultimate purpose, little fear, little hope, little chaos and it's good to go, good enough to get the reader hooked on and to keep on reading it, for example.
... There's a buried secret, dug so deep many centuries ago that no one has been able to find it yet, a secret waiting... Impatiently and desperately waiting... Waiting to break free so it can once again wreak havoc and chaos! Waiting to pave the way for future historians and storytellers to speak its never-ending story. A Story so dark and deadly, even the fear of it alone will be enough to take down the bravest adventurer down to his/her knee and snuff out their life essence right where they stand, you all may ask... Where's ZAMORAK? SARADOMIN? ARMADYL? Surely Zaros and Seren must be immune to this?
Maybe, just maybe if they unite forces and become one, putting aside their petty disagreements!
*LAUGHS* BUT UNTIL THAT HAPPENS, THEY ARE ALL PUNY GODS... DOOMED TO FALL AND BE FORGOTTEN!
But don't you worry, no one will ever find this hidden secret, why you ask? It is simply too ancient for us mere mortals to understand the very magic that binds it all together. It has been hidden for centuries, and it will stay hidden there for centuries more to come... Why do you think it's called the Land Out of Time??
I could carry on but I think ^ that proves my point.
And continue
09-Jul-2019 15:43:57
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Soul Reaperr