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I am a highly dedicated worker who is is motivated and goal driven, i am capable of multi tasking and can work well with a team, i have good communication and problem solving skills, i am excellent at multi tasking, i have exceptional patience and am willing to work whenever
what do you think!?!
my irl self is boring )=! s o might apply using my online persona!
i think if I read that resume i'd toss it out in a second.
the problem with resumes is people think they can just write that they're something and then write a definition of what that something is and everyone will believe them. You actually have to give examples of all of the above otherwise the first thing they'll think is "prove it".
I am a highly dedicated worker who is motivated [by whom, by what] and goal driven [such as...]. I am capable of multi-tasking [when things become tough or if a project is time-sensitive, etc., ...] and can work well with a team. I have great [interpersonal] communication and problem solving skills. I have exceptional patience and I am willing to work whenever and wherever. [Insert something here that recaps the entire paragraph/statement or insert a closure piece that really indicates that you're humble and why you're the better choice to potential viewers].
I kind of edited it a little for you, and those [brackets] indicate what you need to add. I think the statement is a tad generic and, most likely, everyone has used it in some way, shape or form.
I think, if you continue to use this statement, you need something in the opening line (considering it's only a paragraph long) that really grabs your audience.
If you need a different statement, or if you want to edit the current one a bit more, I can easily help you.
31-May-2016 21:51:11
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31-May-2016 21:52:15
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Froud