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Dodo
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Froud said :
Dodo said :
7/11s got nothing on the greatness that is wawa. i never fully appreciated there until i moved away to a place without one :(

Move to my neighbourhood. We have a Wawa that is within walking distance. ive wanted to move back to that area, mainly the pennsylvania side, for a while. atleast once i get my shit sorted out. gotta admit i like it much better up north =p

11-Nov-2014 03:42:49

Froud
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Mmm...

It comes to 16 pages on here. It's supposed to be 15. It's actually only around 6-7 pages, but our teacher wanted this double-spaced. I plan to cut some of it out, but let me know what you guys think--like, what works, what doesn't work.

I am not pleased with the ending; I had to end it somehow. x.x

I don't care if you tell me it sucks or whatever. I just want some insight on how it works as a piece. D:

Edit: I have to re-read some of it, since I stated certain things earlier on. o3o

11-Nov-2014 03:48:41 - Last edited on 11-Nov-2014 05:21:57 by Froud

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