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Shuaps

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-=Characters=-
Costume: Duriel321
Hat: Green phat OR ahrims hood
Top: Ahrims top
Bottom: Ahrims bottom
Amulet: Fury
Weapon: SoL
Shield: Divine SS
Costume: Zezima
*Full Dharocks
Costume: Mod MMG
Full Dragon + Whip
Costume: Sir Vyvin
3rd Age set + Chaotic (maul/weapon) (dds for special attacks) (No helm, mimicking sir vyvins look)
Costume: Woox16
*Full Bandos + Claws + Fire cape
=
Opening Scene: Black (just chat shown)
Tiffy (*** Orb): ... (magical static) ... Attention all white knights! Asgarnia has been thrown into chaos.
A rouge black knight by the name of "duriel" (written duriel321 in chat) has been wrecking havok.
Our strongest mages have tried to contain him, but only have been able to send him into hiding.
We need you, our most elite, to find him and kill him! ... (static) ...

=
-Transition. Slow Fade out and into the Falador scene-
-Sound Effects, birds chirping (not overbearing + maybe water effects cause of close pond)
-Light music with sense of urgency (sitll searching)
=
Second Scene: Falador Park
Zezima: This is no time to drink tea! Speak! I have not all day!
Mod MMG: Hey hey, give tiffy a chance to give us the details.
Tiffy: Oy, there is always time for tea! Now stop your blabbering, this is no time to be hasty. Not only has
this fellow found a way around our protection barriers below the wilderness, but he has already got away with murder!
Sir Vyvin: Also as a heads up... we are desperate so we had to call in a few "favors"
Mod MMG: You dont mean...
-sounds of chains breaking, rustling of chains-
-Woox appears-

(leaving space for edits)

12-Jan-2011 00:14:12 - Last edited on 12-Jan-2011 00:37:39 by Shuaps

Shuaps

Shuaps

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Sir Vyvin: Yes, we have released Woox16 (spoken woox) under the premise that he help us with our problem and we may look the other way on his current
life sentence.
Tiffy: Capital! Also to remind all of you, we have removed all restrictions on you. Meaning you will be able to fight back, even
outside the wilderness.
Zezima: Here goes nothing...
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Third Scene: The walk (still finding location)
Zezima, Woox16, MMG, Vyvin all walk away
Music: One Piece Sound Track - Overtaken

Fourth Scene: The Fight
Location (SAFE) Clan Wars (specific spot far west)
Music: Building action, light and non intrusive to voice acting. Prior to fight.
-Duriel is found by MMG-
MMG: Duriel (written Duriel321) you are under arrest for the mass murder of the citizens of falador.
Duriel: *Laughs to self* Yeah!? You and what army?
ComOrb: This army!
-Zezima, Sir Vyvin, woox, and warriors all suround duriel-
Z - zezima
V - Sir Vyvin
W - Woox
M - MMG
X - Lvl 3 skiller clad in armour
xxwxx
xvozx
xxMxx
(To make them appear, just simple stop motion. Clip before. Clip after they position themselves with various animations)
Music: One Piece Soundtrack - Difficult (2) Music starts
Duriel: Ahahahaha
Duriel: You knights are so confident...
Duriel: That of course will be your downfall!
(Trick: 2 people will stand under duriel with ice barrage prepped. Might take a while to get it
so all the lvl 3's die at once. They will cast barrage on Zezima + Vyvin. Duriel will use a
goblin teleport orb (i think, experiment with mock casting animations) to get a cool casting effect)

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Shuaps

Shuaps

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Duriel: Ahahahahahahaha
(Duriel uses SoL special attack)
All 4 or most use overloads at same time
Zezima of course drops an explosive pot (he is in Dharoks)
-I said most, cause im not sure whether all actors will have it-
Everyone attacks.
Woox: (uses dragon claw special attack)
Zezima: (overloads + damages self to use dharocks and hits)
Vyvin: Dragon dagger special attack
MMG: Uses whip special attack
(damage should be soaked/reduced to prevent death)
Note: With prot melee, divine, and sol spec the damage reduction is around 79% aprox. Not including melee soak.
Duriel: My turn...
(Need way to exagerate damage for duriel)
-Fight breaks out in which Sir Vyvin is killed-
-Zezima teleports away-
"This isnt worth it dieing for!"
MMG and Woox are left and MMG is low on health. Woox will not stop using dragon claw special attack (lol :p)
*** Orb: Time for some reenforcements!
-4 dark bow players appear in cardinal directions-
Mod MMG: Fire everything! (kinda comical dialog, not sure if i want to keep it)
-All 4 rangers fire at the same time and instantly kill Duriel-

(working on ending dialog)

12-Jan-2011 00:14:12 - Last edited on 12-Jan-2011 00:27:20 by Shuaps

Shuaps

Shuaps

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Yeah, trying to give as much specifics as possible. But I would love for someone to look over the scrips. Tell me awkward dialog or tips on pulling off some of the effects.
Much of my inspiration comes from the Wanted! cutscene in which the mage gets surounded by white knights (with the bow notched) and the mage instantly hits 700 on everyone in the area. I then mixed that with some fun falador massacre history and made the story!
Planned time to be no more than 5 mins i suppose. But i have to film it to find out!
Also I would love some tips for tiffy! Just to make his dialog sound more true to his character (talk to the guy sipping tea in falador park to get an idea. Although its best if you have done all of the quest lines to get a true idea of his character)
I have a few actors but always willing to take on more. I actually need more.
Currently got a few skillers (Friends and few people from skillers creed)
Also have a friend of a friend that can do the duriel part (in-game) with the divine + sol + green phat

12-Jan-2011 00:14:13 - Last edited on 12-Jan-2011 00:31:44 by Shuaps

Laieta

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haha Blackxp thats so cool, Im not really the best one to talk about language because I do mistakes in english xD but the script sounds good.
If you dont mind i will tell you few ideas from my experience, I guess its always good to have some feedback ;P
If you are going to have actors, you will have to be more specific on your script, actors will bore quick if you have to think where they will stand when you are filming. Sometimes I write something only for the actors and send it to them before so they have an idea and the filming goes more smooth.
It could be a good idea to think from what angle will you film them saying those sentences, like focus on their faces when they talk. If you want to keep that angle saved you can put together all sentences from the same person, so you film them one after the other without move the camera. You will need another script for that (well i need it, but maybe your memory is better then mine!)
Also I think that when you are editing its very important how you cut the sentences. Try to dont make it slow, it ends with a boring video. A dynamic conversation is always more entretaining. I know that super funny scrips and mega effects are what makes the video shine, but to cut each part carefully is also the key in my opinion.
I know this isnt what yu asked for, but I hope it helps!

12-Jan-2011 00:57:05

Shuaps

Shuaps

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Thank you, the original scrips is like 50% there. I also had issues getting actors. I am 80% finished though :D
Excited to publish it on youtube! I am kinda rough cutting the end of it due to some acting issues but its not really the directions im giving people, just the lack of willing actors.
All in all I had fun and it is relatively entertaining :D
EDIT: I also forgot to thank you a while back! I read your ctiticisms and applied them the day you posted. Just forgot to thank you.
Thanks!

19-Jan-2011 05:02:35 - Last edited on 19-Jan-2011 05:03:08 by Shuaps

Icee1

Icee1

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OMG! IVE GOT AN IDEA FOR THIS YEAR MACHINIMA CONTEST! YEEK. Need to gather my friends. (5 people, I need 1 to be member with high defence)
Harray, Ive got the script worked out now...

22-Jan-2011 16:21:54 - Last edited on 22-Jan-2011 16:22:34 by Icee1

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