Hey all, this is my first story type thing so yeah it probably is pretty bad haha it's just kind of a random little thing I have written up and any feedback on how to improve it it greatly welcomed (If it doesn't suck to bad I'll make part 2 of it
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Personal Log
If you are reading this then I am probably… well let’s not go there… I'm trapped under a wall I think, I can’t really see anything and all I have is this candle light, dust, stone… the last thing I remember is Zaros, no Zamorak wait… arr I can’t even remember… let me start from the start… or the end in our case, where Guthix has failed us… the loadstone network, we never saw it coming… the wizard fools there had to be signs, the pattern the locations it was staring us all in the face… it was never built or designed to transport people it was a bridge to carry a army, and what better place than Gielinor a land rich with natural resources not found on any other plain of existence. Look at it now… in ruins….
I can hear them digging for me, mechanical gears ticking, digging… I haven’t got long. At first we didn't know what to think it was just a bright blue, red light type of thing beaming out of all the loadstone's, it was only when the wizards got there and got there runes ready we knew things were serious. Then they appeared, machines but they didn't use runes, there blasts were like a Dwarf Cannon only it was coming from a small socket in the things hand… Draynor became the ‘Dead Zone’ the heart of their base… but it wasn't an invasion… too late for that… 15 loadstone's… it was a victory… from what I've heard only beyond the holy River Salve, the land of the dead and Zamorak still stands… don’t know why anyone would try and go there, it seems like suicide alone even if you make it there alive…
Arr I hear the last layer of rock being removed… wai…
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Personal Log
If you are reading this then I am probably… well let’s not go there… I'm trapped under a wall I think, I can’t really see anything and all I have is this candle light, dust, stone… the last thing I remember is Zaros, no Zamorak wait… arr I can’t even remember… let me start from the start… or the end in our case, where Guthix has failed us… the loadstone network, we never saw it coming… the wizard fools there had to be signs, the pattern the locations it was staring us all in the face… it was never built or designed to transport people it was a bridge to carry a army, and what better place than Gielinor a land rich with natural resources not found on any other plain of existence. Look at it now… in ruins….
I can hear them digging for me, mechanical gears ticking, digging… I haven’t got long. At first we didn't know what to think it was just a bright blue, red light type of thing beaming out of all the loadstone's, it was only when the wizards got there and got there runes ready we knew things were serious. Then they appeared, machines but they didn't use runes, there blasts were like a Dwarf Cannon only it was coming from a small socket in the things hand… Draynor became the ‘Dead Zone’ the heart of their base… but it wasn't an invasion… too late for that… 15 loadstone's… it was a victory… from what I've heard only beyond the holy River Salve, the land of the dead and Zamorak still stands… don’t know why anyone would try and go there, it seems like suicide alone even if you make it there alive…
Arr I hear the last layer of rock being removed… wai…
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